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Tears slide slowly down my face,
I bet you can see them,
And the lines they trace.
You just don’t care,
Just walk on by,
You pretend I’m not there,
I pretend I don’t cry.
Pretend you don’t see me,
You will anyway,
It’s the same old line,
Just a different day.
I’ll pretend I can’t feel,
The hurt and pain,
I’ll try to become numb,
And cold like rain.
You pretend you don’t see the tears,
That I cry,
I’ll forget my fears,
And pretend that I lied.
No, it’s not true,
That’s what ill say,
Then you can smile and nod,
And just walk away.
Even though I lied,
You will know the truth,
But what you do,
Is up to you.
My tears have turned icy,
I’m losing reason to cry,
I’ve lost reasons to like you,
You know that was a lie.
©2006-2009 ~CrazyBrokenSmiles
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this is a poem i wrote just recantly about a guy!

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:iconpalishere:
is it me? =p

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i don't really like girls myself, this i can tell, but my friend ~scotslegend she thinks they're swell.
very shortly i'll pass out then i'll go into a coma and then i'll die.
:iconcrazybrokensmiles:
lol.... um i dont know..... lol

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....every sigh and scream i make... But I still don't miss you yet....
:iconwicca14:
aww diddums i love it! it is soooooo totally movingand i have ea guess as to who its about

B-)

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if we were a movie,
you'd be the right guy.
and I'd be the best friend,
that you'd fall in love with,
in the end, we'd be laughing,
watching the sunset,fade to black
show the names play that happy song.
:iconcrazybrokensmiles:
Verry funny you know xacly who its about!

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....every sigh and scream i make... But I still don't miss you yet....
:iconlilypadguess:
Damn... that is so brilliantly written... wow.. I love the flow and repeated meaning. It's got great imagry.

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Simply put... for all you out there......
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:iconcrazybrokensmiles:
thank you!
^.^ i have a bit more to add to it tho!

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....every sigh and scream i make... But I still don't miss you yet....
:iconno13lucky13:
wat else do u have 2 add
who is it bout? cody? is it . . . .sum1 i no lyk um . . . . m . . me?

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Just in case i dont see u
Goodmorning,
Goodafternoon, and
Goodnight.

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:iconcrazybrokensmiles:
no its not about you for startes you dont go 2 mi school so you wouldent see me in the hall way!
Yes it is about Cody!

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....every sigh and scream i make... But I still don't miss you yet....
:iconno13lucky13:
oh well i hope ur ok

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Just in case i dont see u
Goodmorning,
Goodafternoon, and
Goodnight.

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